Madi, you did a nice job on much of your paper. Your own reflection on the attacks was thoughtful, and your interview was well done. But you left out a major part of the assignment. You were supposed to describe the economic effects of 9/11, and you needed to include a Works Cited list. One last suggestion: give your essay a thorough proofreading, nice and slow, and use spell check (or better yet, a dictionary) to make sure you reduce the number of errors.
Madi, you did a nice job on much of your paper. Your own reflection on the attacks was thoughtful, and your interview was well done. But you left out a major part of the assignment. You were supposed to describe the economic effects of 9/11, and you needed to include a Works Cited list. One last suggestion: give your essay a thorough proofreading, nice and slow, and use spell check (or better yet, a dictionary) to make sure you reduce the number of errors.
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